I showed this draft to my fellow students and gathered their opinion.
Carlos (MA Visual effect) said some thing needed for understanding easier because it was unclear relevance between those images and Yoon (MA Environment design) told me that the prostitute's image looked more like fashion photo.
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It needs something to make stronger connection between before and after images.
More shocking prostitue image needed like sad, dirty and cheap so as, looks failed fer life.
I think the prostitution scene is unnecessary because it's disturbing attention to main image and copy.
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